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yozoh 发表于 2012-3-12 19:32:55 |显示全部楼层
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此帖为3.12开始的样板贴,本周起精注有几项新的调整,
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[精注训练] TBBT106-21生活大爆炸之背后议论(5)  Yozoh注 Wind审




Leonard: Yes, but our society has undergone a paradigm shift, in the information age, Sheldon, you and I are the alpha males. We shouldn’t have to back down.

Sheldon: True. Why don’t you text him that and see if he backs down?

Leonard: No. I’m going to assert my dominance face to face.

Sheldon: Face to face? Are you going to wait for him to sit down, or are you going to stand on a coffee table?



Paradigm shift
【释】a basic change in ideas or methods(Bing)
【例】The CEO of a major computer software manufacture announced a paradigm shift to his executives today.(Bing)
【例】Geeks often think out of the box and bring some paradigm shift to this world through innovative technology, that’s god’s truth.   (自造)

Alpha males
【释】An alpha male is the top-ranking animal in a social group.  (Wikipedia)
【例】Javier Bardem tops in the alpha male list for his absolute masculinity shown in all his film works.   (自造)
【例】In the natural world, alpha males got more leadership as well as chances of mating among his species group. (自造)

Back down
【释】To withdraw from a position, opinion, or commitment.(TheFreeDic)
【例】Riding on the crowded bus, I stupidly raised my foot a bit. I regretted it immediately-- there was no place to put it back down! (Bing)
【例】We can’t lose this battle, because there’s no way to back down, let’s throw away all our worries and maneuver on, buddies! (自造)

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这对公司来说是个大转折,人事上的调换几乎是不可避免的。
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我的美剧口语梦 发表于 2012-3-12 19:38:17 |显示全部楼层
1  帖子分类加上

2 所有释和例给出中文

3 back down第二个例句没有备注

格式改了我再说内容
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yozoh 发表于 2012-3-12 20:29:01 |显示全部楼层
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我的美剧口语梦 发表于 2012-3-12 19:38
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2 所有释和例给出中文


Leonard: Yes, but our society has undergone a paradigm shift, in the information age, Sheldon, you and I are the alpha males. We shouldn’t have to back down.


Paradigm shift
【释】a basic change in ideas or methods(Bing)
范式转变,指思维方式或模式上的彻底转变。
【例】The CEO of a major computer software manufacture announced a paradigm shift to his executives today. (Bing)
一家大型软件生产商的总裁今天宣布要对其管理人员进行改组。
【例】Geeks often think out of the box and bring some paradigm shift to this world through innovative technology, that’s god’s truth.   (自造)
极客们总能跳出条条框框来思考,并且用创新技术给世界带来彻底转变,这是绝对的真理。

Alpha males
【释】An alpha male is the top-ranking animal in a social group.(Wikipedia)
  
社交种群中最高级别的男性。
【例】Javier Bardem tops in the alpha male list for his absolute masculinity shown in all his film works.  (自造)
由于他在电影中塑造的充满男子气概的形象,贾维尔.巴顿荣登“男人中的男人”榜首。
【例】In the natural world, alpha males got more leadership as well as chances of mating among his species group.  (自造)
在自然界中,最高等雄性获得最多的领导权,以及更多与种群中的雌性交配的机会。

Back down
【释】To withdraw from a position, opinion, or commitment.  (TheFreeDic)
从某种职位,观点,或承诺中撤离或放弃

【例】Riding on the crowded bus, I stupidly raised my foot a bit. I regretted it immediately-- there was no place to put it back down! (Bing)
乘上拥挤的公交,我很二的抬了一下脚,但马上就后悔了,再也没有地方让我把脚给放回去了!
【例】We can’t lose this battle, because there’s no way to back down, let’s throw away all our worries and maneuver on, buddies! (自造)
我们必须打赢这场战争,不能退缩,让我们抛开所有疑虑向前进吧,同胞们!

中翻英
这对公司来说是个大转折,人事上的调换几乎是不可避免的。

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我的美剧口语梦  备注不合要求 把中文另起一行 你这样备注会导致读者误以为中文也是字典给出的呢  详情 回复 发表于 2012-3-12 20:33:08

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我的美剧口语梦 发表于 2012-3-12 20:33:08 |显示全部楼层
yozoh 发表于 2012-3-12 20:29
Leonard: Yes, but our society has undergone a paradigm shift, in the information age, Sheldon, you ...

备注不合要求
把中文另起一行
你这样备注会导致读者误以为中文也是字典给出的呢
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yozoh 发表于 2012-3-12 20:43:08 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 yozoh 于 2012-3-12 20:52 编辑
我的美剧口语梦 发表于 2012-3-12 20:33
备注不合要求
把中文另起一行
你这样备注会导致读者误以为中文也是字典给出的呢


Leonard: Yes, but our society has undergone a paradigm shift, in the information age, Sheldon, you and I are the alpha males. We shouldn’t have to back down.


Paradigm shift
【释】a basic change in ideas or methods(Bing)
范式转变,指思维方式或模式上的彻底转变。
【例】The CEO of a major computer software manufacture announced a paradigm shift to his executives today. (Bing)
一家大型软件生产商的总裁今天宣布要对其管理人员进行改组。
【例】Geeks often think out of the box and bring some paradigm shift to this world through innovative technology, that’s god’s truth.   (自造)
极客们总能跳出条条框框来思考,并且用创新技术给世界带来彻底转变,这是绝对的真理。

Alpha males
【释】An alpha male is the top-ranking animal in a social group.(Wikipedia)
  社交种群中最高级别的男性。
【例】Javier Bardem tops in the alpha male list for his absolute masculinity shown in all his film works.  (自造)
由于他在电影中塑造的充满男子气概的形象,贾维尔.巴顿荣登“男人中的男人”榜首。
【例】In the natural world, alpha males got more leadership as well as chances of mating among his species group.  (自造)
在自然界中,最高等雄性获得最多的领导权,以及更多与种群中的雌性交配的机会。

Back down
【释】To withdraw from a position, opinion, or commitment.  (TheFreeDic)
从某种职位,观点,或承诺中撤离或放弃
【例】Riding on the crowded bus, I stupidly raised my foot a bit. I regretted it immediately-- there was no place to put it back down! (Bing)
乘上拥挤的公交,我很二的抬了一下脚,但马上就后悔了,再也没有地方让我把脚给放回去了!
【例】We can’t lose this battle, because there’s no way to back down, let’s throw away all our worries and maneuver on, buddies! (自造)
我们必须打赢这场战争,不能退缩,让我们抛开所有疑虑向前进吧,同胞们!

中翻英
这对公司来说是个大转折,人事上的调换几乎是不可避免的。
It’s a paradigm shift for this company, therefore it’s almost inevitable to dismiss some staff.

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我的美剧口语梦  Paradigm shift 【释】a basic change in ideas or methods(Bing) 范式转变,指思维方式或模式上的彻底转变。 【例】The CEO of a major computer software manufacture announced a paradigm shift to his execut  详情 回复 发表于 2012-3-12 21:24:01

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我的美剧口语梦 发表于 2012-3-12 21:24:01 |显示全部楼层
yozoh 发表于 2012-3-12 20:43
Leonard: Yes, but our society has undergone a paradigm shift, in the information age, Sheldon, you ...

Paradigm shift
【释】a basic change in ideas or methods(Bing)
范式转变,指思维方式或模式上的彻底转变。
【例】The CEO of a major computer software manufacture announced a paradigm shift to his executives today. (Bing)
一家大型软件生产商的总裁今天宣布要对其管理人员进行改组。
【例】Geeks often think out of the box and bring some paradigm shift to this world through innovative technology, that’s god’s truth.   (自造)
极客们总能跳出条条框框来思考,并且用创新技术给世界带来彻底转变,这是绝对的真理。


第二个造句改为
geeks often think out of the box and sometimes they can bring paradigm shift to the world
请尽量不要造句,造句请尽量简单化,口语化,



Alpha males
【释】An alpha male is the top-ranking animal in a social group.(Wikipedia)
  社交种群中最高级别的男性。
【例】Javier Bardem tops in the alpha male list for his absolute masculinity shown in all his film works.  (自造)
由于他在电影中塑造的充满男子气概的形象,贾维尔.巴顿荣登“男人中的男人”榜首。
【例】In the natural world, alpha males got more leadership as well as chances of mating among his species group.  (自造)
在自然界中,最高等雄性获得最多的领导权,以及更多与种群中的雌性交配的机会。


两个例句都删掉,换成字典例句如下

【例】most alpha males need to control the women in their lives(牛津)
大多数优秀的男人都喜欢控制他们的女人
【例】You want to know 10 secrets to be the alpha male?(google)
你想知道10个成为优秀男人的秘密吗

第二个例句是google搜索 alpha male根据别人句子改变而成




Back down
【释】To withdraw from a position, opinion, or commitment.  (TheFreeDic)
从某种职位,观点,或承诺中撤离或放弃
【例】Riding on the crowded bus, I stupidly raised my foot a bit. I regretted it immediately-- there was no place to put it back down! (Bing)
乘上拥挤的公交,我很二的抬了一下脚,但马上就后悔了,再也没有地方让我把脚给放回去了!
【例】We can’t lose this battle, because there’s no way to back down, let’s throw away all our worries and maneuver on, buddies! (自造)
我们必须打赢这场战争,不能退缩,让我们抛开所有疑虑向前进吧,同胞们!

第一个例句完全错误,结构意思都错了
第二个例句换成字典例句
再去查两个字典例句吧


中翻英
这对公司来说是个大转折,人事上的调换几乎是不可避免的。
It’s a paradigm shift for this company, therefore it’s almost inevitable to dismiss some staff.


中文部分不清晰,改为


难免会出现裁掉一些员工
请在下边给出要求修改的部分,即back down的例句
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yozoh 发表于 2012-3-12 21:35:33 |显示全部楼层
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Paradigm shift
【释】a basic change in ideas or methods(Bing)
范式转变,指思维方式或模式上的彻底 ...

Back down
【例】She refused to back down on a point of principle.(Oxford)
她拒绝在原则问题上做出让步。
【例】if you back down about dinner again, I'm not going to agree to another date. (Merriam-Webster)
如果你再在吃晚餐的事情上放我一次鸽子,我再也不会和你约会了。

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我的美剧口语梦 发表于 2012-3-12 21:37:41 |显示全部楼层
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此帖为3.12开始的样板贴,本周起精注有几项新的调整,
具体参见  http://www.mjenglish.org/thread-1421-1-1.html
此帖为样板贴,精注训练请参见此帖


[精注训练] TBBT106-21生活大爆炸之背后议论(5)  Yozoh注 Wind审




Leonard: Yes, but our society has undergone a paradigm shift, in the information age, Sheldon, you and I are the alpha males. We shouldn’t have to back down.

Sheldon: True. Why don’t you text him that and see if he backs down?

Leonard: No. I’m going to assert my dominance face to face.

Sheldon: Face to face? Are you going to wait for him to sit down, or are you going to stand on a coffee table?


Paradigm shift
【释】a basic change in ideas or methods(Bing)
范式转变,指思维方式或模式上的彻底转变。
【例】The CEO of a major computer software manufacture announced a paradigm shift to his executives today. (Bing)
一家大型软件生产商的总裁今天宣布要对其管理人员进行改组。
【例】geeks often think out of the box and sometimes they can bring paradigm shift to the world.极客们总能跳出条条框框来思考,并且给世界带来彻底转变。


Alpha males
【释】An alpha male is the top-ranking animal in a social group.(Wikipedia)
  社交种群中最高级别的男性。
【例】most alpha males need to control the women in their lives(牛津)
大多数优秀的男人都喜欢控制他们的女人
【例】You want to know 10 secrets to be the alpha male?(google)
你想知道10个成为优秀男人的秘密吗


Back down
【释】To withdraw from a position, opinion, or commitment.  (TheFreeDic)
从某种职位,观点,或承诺中撤离或放弃
【例】She refused to back down on a point of principle.(Oxford)
她拒绝在原则问题上做出让步。
【例】if you back down about dinner again, I'm not going to agree to another date. (Merriam-Webster)
如果你再在吃晚餐的事情上放我一次鸽子,我再也不会和你约会了。

中翻英
这对公司来说是个大转折,人事上的调换几乎是不可避免的。
It’s a paradigm shift for this company, therefore it’s almost inevitable to dismiss some staff.
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我的美剧口语梦 发表于 2012-3-12 21:46:27 |显示全部楼层
定稿~~~~~~~~~~

终于定稿了, 特别注意以下几个地方


1 当精注将最终版的笔记发布之后,格式没问题,
内容没问题,视频,对白,讲解,练习,答案都包含的时候,才能定稿


2 只有看到定稿二字才能授予勤奋值

3 如果精注做到一半没能做完的,也处于消失状态找不到人的,可以把精注交给自己负责的其他人重新做

4 批改的时候可以粘贴原文然后在底下加批注
也可以直接批改,都是 1 vs 1的,所以很清晰的

5 精注一定要回复审校帖子,这样审校才能收到提醒
即先点击回复帖子,然后点击进入高级模式

6 精注是一种态度,对自己负责,对别人负责,多翻几本字典,1,2分钟的事情罢了

还有问题跟帖提问~
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